2008-2-12 11:29 AM
cinza1888
回復 #79 小雞-0- 的帖子
第一次睇我個po???!!
咁要多d支持我na
2008-2-12 02:02 PM
wen_wendy
十卜十卜十卜十卜
2008-2-12 03:42 PM
嘉文CaRmAn
好好睇-0-
繼續post!!!
我十卜你
2008-2-12 04:07 PM
小雞-0-
:smY38kz: 加油作多D>"<
Forever 10p0`
2008-2-12 08:18 PM
[[..惠惠..]]
好好睇呀!!]]
繼續Post呀!!]]
+油唷..]]
支持你..]]
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"我愛黑澀會" "我愛棒棒堂"
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2008-2-12 09:52 PM
cinza1888
好多謝大家,,我明日可能再po過!:sFQ90Oy:
2008-2-13 11:35 AM
cinza1888
[粗口+口語+原創]永遠愛住你 ''第一次作,,''
岩岩返屋企之後....
沒有得你的允許 我都會愛下去 互相祝福心軟之際或者准我吻下去<---瑩電話鈴聲>>
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電話中>>
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瑩[喂,,邊個牙]
琪[我牙,,]
瑩[做咩咁好死打比我牙?!]
琪[冇,,傾下計姐,,]
瑩[一定有古怪..]
琪[下,,有咩?牙係na,,]
瑩[咩係牙?]
琪[你幾時同牙峰....]{比瑩打斷左說話}
瑩[哦,,原來係講呢樣野>>]
琪[係牙,,你幾時同牙峰開始架??]
瑩[哦,,,仲咩呀,,唔係溝我條仔ma]
琪[邊''咁''牙?!]
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係咁,,我同牙琪,,傾左城晚
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第2日.......
沒有得你的允許 我都會愛下去 互相祝福心軟之際或者准我吻下去<---瑩電話鈴聲>>
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電話中>>
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瑩[喂!?]
峰[係我牙,,]
瑩[嘩,,你咁早??]
峰[我掛住你牙ma,,,]
瑩[下,,,]
峰[你掛住我咩??!]
瑩[唔係牙,,,]
峰[今日你出唔出街?]
瑩[好牙,,,約我牙?]
峰[你咪唔得先??]
瑩[唔係,,咁約唔約牙琪,,牙欣 呀??]
峰[唔牙,,]
瑩[下,,點解呀?]
峰[因為..我只想同你去街咋]
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係呢一刻,,瑩覺得有峰呢個男朋友,,
好開心>>>>>
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峰[喂喂...]
峰[牙瑩...]
瑩[係..]
峰[做咩牙你,,]
瑩[冇野牙,,,]
峰[咁一陣我黎你屋企牙!]
瑩[哦,,好牙]
峰[咁你扮到令令等我na,,]
瑩[我使咩扮牙,,]
峰[係na,,我老婆仔最令]
瑩[哈...咁就差唔多]
峰[咁一陣見na]
瑩[好牙,,bibi]
峰[bibi]
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Cut 線之後......
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瑩[哈..一陣著咩''3''好na?]
瑩[是但na,,,我著咩,,峰都話令架na,,]
{作者:你咪傻啦,,,唉....}
瑩[邊個話我??]
{作者:冇人話你,,bibi}
瑩[bibi,,,我同邊個bibi呢??]
瑩[哈....傻左...]
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30分鐘之後......
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叮嚀....<----瑩的門鐘
瑩[睇下邊個先,,,,,]
峰[咪係我囉,,]
瑩[哈....我令唔令牙,,,]
峰[令,,全世界最令係你,,]
瑩[哈,,,]
峰[咁我地去邊牙??]
瑩[你話是牙,,]
峰[我地不如去公園!!]
瑩[下,,,公園???好似低b左d]
峰[係海洋公園牙]
瑩[係咪你請先]
峰[當然na,,, Let's Go]
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PO住小小先,,,,多d人回我na,,哈
2008-2-13 12:53 PM
嘉文CaRmAn
十卜十卜!!
回你la>[]<
2008-2-13 01:40 PM
ahmei
新讀者_xdd
po吧!!`
我覺得好好睇滴xDD
2008-2-13 03:56 PM
kaka1995
好睇哇"
+卜`
佢地去到海洋公園發生咩事牙?
2008-2-13 04:05 PM
toto1994520
我成日睇..都冇比cm你
e個故事真係好感人呀
點解你講故事個d女主角
同我d fd子一樣咁制..
but 希望佢地會相愛一世啦~呠~
2008-2-13 08:44 PM
[[..惠惠..]]
好好睇呀!!]]
繼續Post呀!!]]
+油唷..]]
支持你..]]
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"我愛黑澀會" "我愛棒棒堂"
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2008-2-13 10:16 PM
cinza1888
回復 #89 ahmei 的帖子
新讀者?!多謝,,
好睇就要日日都睇na
2008-2-13 10:18 PM
cinza1888
回復 #91 toto1994520 的帖子
一樣??哈..個個愛情小說也差不多的<<
2008-2-13 10:21 PM
cinza1888
我呢排開多左個愛情小說,,多d支持我
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2008-2-13 10:25 PM
嘉文CaRmAn
我支持你~!
你作得好好睇阿~-[]-
2008-2-14 02:39 AM
朱古力糖糖
十卜十卜十卜..
加油喔!好好好看呀!!`^w^
2008-2-14 11:12 AM
cinza1888
嘩,,,好多人回牙,,,我今日要po先:sWh98W1:
2008-2-14 12:04 PM
cinza1888
[粗口+口語+原創]永遠愛住你 ''第一次作,,''
上集講到,,峰帶瑩去海洋公園,,,,
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大家諗下,,峰咁有米,,點會同牙瑩搭巴士,,地鐵牙,,咁當然係渣.........
瑩[咁我地搭地鐵牙??]
峰[唔係!!]
瑩[咁搭咩牙??]
峰[我渣車好冇??]
瑩[Yo''真架??]
峰[係牙,,我點會呃老婆豬姐,,,,]
瑩[咁快d行na,,,]
峰[oK,,]
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去到海洋公園的門口,,,,,
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瑩[快d買''飛''啦]
峰[使咩買姐,,]
瑩[你唔買點入牙??]
峰[呢到我有d股份,,so,,唔使買]
瑩[哦,,老公豬,,你好叻牙,,]
峰[咁快d入na]
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入到去,,,,,,
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瑩[嘩,,好多野玩牙,,玩咩先牙?]
峰[你未黎過呢到咩?]
瑩[黎過牙,,,]
峰[咁你點解好似咁開心咁既?!]
瑩[咁我第一次同你黎mA]]
峰[呵...咁又係,,]
瑩[你仲未答我喎!!]
峰[答你d咩牙?]
瑩[玩邊樣先...]
峰[不如睇下水母先..]
瑩[好牙,,聽你話..]
峰[點解你同我拍左拖之後..咁聽我話,,]
瑩[乜你唔中意咩?!]
峰[唔係,,你變成點我都中意你,,]
瑩[咁快d啦,,d水母等緊我地架,,]
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睇完水母.....
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峰[岩岩d水母好q牙]
瑩[係牙,,]
峰[我地不如上去山果到,,]
瑩[好牙]
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去到搭車果到..
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瑩[嘩,,咁多人..]
峰[咪係囉,,,不過我地都唔洗排,,]
瑩[但係佢地好慘牙,,]
峰[咁我地咪排隊囉,,]
瑩[咁又唔好,,,呵...]
峰[=_=]
工作人員1[現在你地要拍照..1,,2,,3,,]
瑩[死啦,,,]
峰[咩死牙,,]
瑩[我驚影到我好樣牙,,,]
峰[點會呢,,我老婆係校花mA,,]
瑩[話就係咁話姐,,,]
峰[喂,,咁你姐係唔相我眼光na,,,,]
瑩[咁又係,,唔影都影左啦,,,]
峰[咁我地就行na]
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上到車,,,,,
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瑩[睇下,,我地坐果''家''係紅色,,,]
峰[唔好咩?]
瑩[咁又唔係,,同你坐咩車都係咁好,,,]
峰[哈.....]
瑩[嘩,,,,,]
峰[仲咩牙,,驚驚牙?]
瑩[我.....我邊有牙]{口不對心}
峰[驚咪講囉,,]
瑩[我都冇,,驚咩姐]{口不對心}
峰[我有個方法令你唔驚,,]
瑩[咩牙?!]
峰[又話唔驚,,唔驚問黎仲咩姐,,]
瑩[好衰架,你知我驚既,,]
峰[個方法就係......]
瑩[就係....]{未講完,,峰以經嘴左去瑩到}
呢個深情既吻,,,係咪可以令牙瑩佢一生難忘呢?!
5分鐘之後......
瑩[嘩,,我冇氣na]
峰[乜老婆你咁屎架!!我就唔同na]
瑩[點唔同牙?!]
峰[我嘴到30分鐘都得,,,]
瑩[*=*]
但係下一集,,,佢地就冇咁開心,,,係海洋公園看見一個唔想見的人,,,,
cm.....
2008-2-14 12:28 PM
wen_wendy
十卜...永遠支持你...y0