2010-2-27 08:18 PM
~Yukie仔~
HeLP!!Plz!!
[size=4][color=green]希望咁多位可以幫下我作一篇悔過書!!
因為我咁大個女都未寫過d咁ge野....希望你地可以幫我啦!!!:siG256P:
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[size=3][color=red]寫悔過書ge原因:[/color]
[/size][size=2][color=orange]時間:[/color][/size][color=darkorchid]星期四,上英文課的時候
[/color][size=2][color=orange]人物:[/color][/size][color=darkorchid]小明,大文,Miss Ng,陳Sir[/color]
[size=2][color=orange]起因(由於書面語太麻煩,so我用番口語!!):[/color][/size][color=darkorchid]Miss Ng入左來,見到張枱盒「象筋」散晒,佢就問:「係邊個整成咁ge?」,冇人應佢,佢就話:「冇人應,咁姐係全班都要負責啦,食lunch之前,你地要將全個班房整番整齊同乾淨佢!」
[/color][size=2][color=orange]經過:[/color][/size][color=darkorchid]小明同大文吾服氣,於是就傳紙仔,張紙仔寫左一D話Miss Ng同Miss Fung ge壞話,有d仲用粗口tim!!![/color]
[size=2][color=orange]結果:[/color][/size][color=darkorchid]傳下傳下,張紙仔比Miss Ng發現左,Miss Ng將張紙仔比左訓導主任陳Sir,陳Sir要小明同大文寫悔過書!!
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[/color][size=3][color=red]悔過書ge內容&注意係咁ge:[/color][/size]
[size=2][color=orange]1.[/color][/size][color=magenta]解釋點解要寫悔過書;
[/color][size=2][color=orange]2.[/color][/size][color=magenta]說明自己好後悔&以後應該點做(e.g:以後吾會再傳紙仔)&道歉;
[/color][size=2][color=orange]3.[/color][/size][color=magenta]用書面語作;[/color]
[size=2][color=orange]4.[/color][/size][color=magenta]用正確格式;
[/color][size=2][color=orange]5.[/color][/size][color=magenta]300字以上!!!
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[/color][color=deepskyblue]thx咁多位!!!e篇係一篇作文黎ga!!吾好誤會>3<:syz16G9: [/color]