I-See 論壇 » 文學區 » 原創區 » Magic Love出左第十五回law∼(o係pg.6 ge第 134 帖 呢!)

2004-12-17 01:55 PM Yanyan∼
巧巧睇呀∼ 加油∼

[ Last edited by Yanyan∼ on 2004-12-17 at 02:09 PM ]

2004-12-17 02:16 PM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Yanyan∼[/b]  在 2004-12-17 01:55 PM 發表:[/u]

巧巧睇呀∼ 加油∼ [/quote]

thank you a∼*

2004-12-18 12:17 AM Kama
今次好多對白lei~
我點會嬲rainrain wor~
我唔嬲rainrain嫁~
我係學生會主席 <----------突然覺得自己好叻叻tim~
繼續作落去ae~support u嫁~wakaka~

2004-12-18 04:08 AM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Sai[/b]  在 2004-12-17 06:02 PM 發表:[/u]

點解我好似咁cheap的??? [/quote]

點解你會gum覺得呢???

2004-12-18 04:09 AM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Kama[/b]  在 2004-12-18 12:17 AM 發表:[/u]

今次好多對白lei~
我點會嬲rainrain wor~
我唔嬲rainrain嫁~
我係學生會主席 <----------突然覺得自己好叻叻tim~
繼續作落去ae~support u嫁~wakaka~ [/quote]

Thank you∼*
 哈∼你係好叻ma!haha∼
  ok,我會努力ga la∼∼∼

2004-12-18 09:19 AM 笨Cherie*
你又話有cherie...>v<
都冇既....玩我..

2004-12-18 11:29 AM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]cherie∼*[/b]  在 2004-12-18 09:19 AM 發表:[/u]

你又話有cherie...>v<
都冇既....玩我.. [/quote]
Sorry....
 ha....ng記得delete番......

2004-12-18 03:02 PM RAINY
[color=Teal]�歈寣飾菺憸鵂鞥諢@Love Chapter 10:

Steven
Rain
Kama
Yan
Kenny
欣欣
吉仔
Sai

---小食部---
Kenny:Rain!
Rain:(微笑)早晨∼
Rain:你女朋友呢?未番a?
Kenny:係a∼
Steven:早晨!
Rain:(微笑)早晨呀∼
Kama:係wo....Steven,你問你Daddy,媽咪問成點a?
Steven:哦∼佢地話冇問題wo∼
Kama:YEAH!thank you∼
Steven:You’re welcome∼
Kama:係wo...個傻Yan呢..?
Rain:....佢ng係番左喇咩?
Kenny:未見人wo....
Steven:呢...行緊黎啦∼
Kama:佢同埋欣欣一齊番wo∼
欣欣:早晨呀,咁多位∼
各人:早晨∼
Kenny:係a!今日Magic Club又有meeting喇!
Steven:係?
Kenny:你地記住黎呀∼
Yan:Ok la∼
---Magic Club meeting---
吉:大家好呀∼今曰又有位新同學仔加入Magic Club la∼大家請用熱烈ge掌聲歡迎佢丫∼
Sai:Hi!
Kama:下......又係佢a....真係冤家路窄....
Yan:你好憎佢咩?
Rain:佢雖然cool d...但係都幾好人丫...
Kama:我最憎呢d有錢仔ga la!
Steven:話ng定你第時愛上佢呢∼
Kama:(作狀打Steven)信ng信我丙你丫!
Kama:佢ng好坐埋黎tim a!
吉:Sai呀,你自己揾個位坐丫∼
Sai:哦!
(Sai見Kama隔離有空位,所以就坐o係Kama隔離喇...)
Sai:(望住Kama)Hi∼
Kama:.......><
Steven:Ha..ha...ha!
Kama:(盯住Steven)笑咩呀笑!
Rain:hehe
Kama:Rain! ><
吉:ng好玩喇!今曰要教大家點o係手度變條手巾仔出黎la∼睇住喇!
(吉三五下手勢就變左條絲巾出黎喇...)
吉:有邊個識變ga?
Steven:我!咁簡單我識ge∼
(Steven搞左好耐都拉唔到條絲巾出黎...)
Steven:”cake”住左tim.....
各人:Hahaha!
Kenny:等我黎la∼
(Kenny三五下手勢就變左條絲巾出黎...)
各人:wa∼好野wo∼
(Steven望住Rain...)
Steven:(苦笑)....頭先我係咪好”羅”呀?
Rain:(微笑)都幾ga......不過∼你都幾勇丫∼Haha∼
Steven:(扁嘴)你笑我....
Rain:算la∼我夠ng識law∼學下咪識law∼
Steven:嗯!
---meeting過後...學校外---
(6:30pm)
Kenny:Rain,你走未?
Rain:走喇∼
Kenny:送你番去丫?
Rain:唔洗喇∼(拉住Steven)Steven送我咪得law∼
Steven:我?
Rain:你ng想咩?
Steven:想∼
Kenny:咁好la∼我ng阻你地兩個喇∼哈哈∼咁有邊個靚女想我送佢番屋企嫁?
Yan:我!
Kenny:gum好la∼
Yan:你送我,你女朋友會ng會呷醋ga?
Kenny:ng會∼
Yan:我放心喇∼哈哈∼
Rain:Kama,你呢?不如叫Steven送埋你喇∼
Kama:唔好喇∼費事阻住你地啦∼我自己番得喇∼
Yan:咁你小心啦∼
Kama:嗯!拜拜∼
---車站---
(車站一個人都冇...)
Kama:咁耐都末有車ga...
(一個鐘過後.....雖然7:00pm,但係天黑曬...)
Kama:搞錯呀!車又冇!人影又冇隻....咁恐怖ga...
(突然.....)
飛仔A:靚女,–個人等車a?
(Kama冇理佢....跟住個飛仔有進一步ge行動....隻手撘住Kama膊頭.....Kama立即縮開..)
Kama:痴線嫁!
(Kama轉身走....飛仔一手拉住Kama....迫左Kama埋牆...)
Kama:你想點呀!!救命呀!!
飛仔A:呢度1個人都冇,鬼聽到呀?!
Kama:救命呀!!救命呀!!救命呀!!
(當個飛仔諗住有再進一步ge行動時....突然Sai o係後面,打左個飛仔–拳...)
飛仔A:wa!邊鬼個打我?!
Kama:Sai!
飛仔A:哦∼你條仔呀?
Sai:ng係..
飛仔A:咁我搞佢關你鬼事呀?!死開la!
(當個飛仔諗住拉番Kama過黎,Sai一手拉住個飛仔件衫...之後撻佢落地....個飛仔撻到死死下...)
Sai:(拖住Kama)走喇!
(Sai拖住Kama一路跑.....Kama–路望住Sai....直到去到7仔門囗...)
Sai:你有冇事呀?
Kama:冇野.....係呢....你點解gum勁ge?撻到個死飛仔死死下...
Sai:哦∼我學柔道ga∼仲黑帶tim∼hehe∼ ^^"
Sai:下次你放學呢,揾你男朋友送你呀,呢排呢,多左好多呢d咁ge人a!
Kama:我.....都冇男朋友.....
Sai:咁呀....你住邊嫁?
Kama:咪........XXXX街law∼
Sai:哦∼好近我屋企姐∼第時你放學呢,我叫個司機車埋你丫∼
Kama:哦....麻煩曬∼
Kama:咁點解你今日冇司機車ge?
Sai:佢今日ng得閒姐∼
Kama:哦∼.....係呀,多謝曬你a∼如果ng係你,可能我已經.....
Sai:ng洗客氣wo∼唔通我見死不救咩∼
Kama:睇黎∼我都要對你改觀喇∼
Sai:哈哈∼
---續---[/color]

[ Last edited by Rain∼* on 2004-12-18 at 03:12 PM ]

2004-12-18 03:10 PM 塔[TEP:]
快d有得睇仲好

2004-12-18 03:13 PM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]雯mon[/b]  在 2004-12-18 03:10 PM 發表:[/u]

快d有得睇仲好 [/quote]

快ga喇∼haha∼

2004-12-18 03:27 PM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Sai[/b]  在 2004-12-18 03:18 PM 發表:[/u]

正啦,,佢hehe乜野牙???卡~~
死啦,,,,,,我鍾意左kama牙><” [/quote]

 hahaha!
  Kama好女仔黎ga∼呵呵∼
   

2004-12-18 03:40 PM Kama
好睇ae~
仲好好笑~
比d衰人咩tim~驚驚lei~
wakaka~
rain開始接受Steven la~gd AE~!!

2004-12-18 03:42 PM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Sai[/b]  在 2004-12-18 03:37 PM 發表:[/u]

有關係咩??? [/quote]

..........冇關ga.......”

2004-12-18 03:44 PM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Kama[/b]  在 2004-12-18 03:40 PM 發表:[/u]

好睇ae~
仲好好笑~
比d衰人咩tim~驚驚lei~
wakaka~
rain開始接受Steven la~gd AE~!! [/quote]

thz∼
 Steven咁好點會唔接受呀∼haha∼

2004-12-19 06:50 AM RAINY
[color=Purple]�歈寣飾菺憸鵂鞥諢@Love Chapter 11:

Steven
Rain
Charlene
Cherie

---續上.....Rain同Steven回家路上...---
Steven:係呢,頭先Kenny話送你wo!點解你叫佢ng好送你ge?你ng係好鍾意佢ga咩?
Rain:我係就係好中意佢....但係明知佢ng中意我,我地又ng會有結果,gum又可必再浪費青春呢?不如努力d塭一個中意自己ge人咪仲好∼係咪?
Steven:你真係咁諗?你放得低ga喇?
Rain:我都ng知自己放ng放得低ga...試下la∼
Steven:咁都好ge∼俾多d機會自己ma∼
Rain:hehe...(奸笑)俾多d機會自己??係俾多d機會想追我ge人呀!哈哈∼
Steven:......-_-” 邊有人追你呀....?
Rain:(大力拍落Steven膊頭度)冇咩∼?
Steven:......”(扯開話題)你到喇wo!
Rain:呀,係wo∼
Steven:拜拜∼
Rain:拜∼
(當Steven想走時...)
Rain:喂!
Steven:咩事a?
Rain:um...你聽日得ng得閒呀?
Steven:得a...
Rain:陪我去睇戲丫∼上次o個部呀a...應該未落畫掛...
Steven:好呀!...我聽日黎塭你丫∼
Rain:Ok∼拜拜∼
---翟日....Rain’s home---
(叮...噹...)
Steven:早晨∼
Rain:早晨∼!
Steven:行得未?
Rain:Ok ga la∼
---UA戲院門囗---
Rain:好彩套戲未落畫姐∼
Steven:嗯∼
(咁arm,Cherie&Charlene都黎睇戲...)
Cherie:Charlene,你睇下係的Rain同Steven呀...
Charlene:佢地兩個係度仲乜呢?
Cherie:....”..黎得戲院梗係睇戲啦...
(Steven同Rain o個邊)
Steven:食ng食爆谷呀?
Rain:好wo∼
Steven:你去買啦∼
Rain:(扁嘴)仲乜要我去買wo...
Steven:(拍拍Rain個頭)講下笑咋∼我去買啦∼
Rain:hehe∼我要埋汽水wo∼
Steven:得喇∼
(Charlene&Cherie)
Charlene:(有點生氣)有冇搞錯a!玩到咁開心...
Cherie:乜你中意Steven ga?
Charlene:......ng係a....
Cherie:唔係?你呷醋呷到出曬面la wo..
Charlene:bin有....
Cherie:冇就買飛喇∼
Charlene:哦..
(Charlene一路行一路望Steven&Rain,Charlene只見佢地玩到好開心....Charlene即時有d唔開心....)
---睇完戲後...---
Rain:頭先套戲好好睇呀可?
Steven:係a∼
(Rain&Steven,Charlene&Cherie咁arm撞到...)
Steven:Charlene?Cherie?
Cherie:Hi∼
Rain:Hi∼
Charlene:你地armarm睇完戲a?
Steven:係呀∼
Rain:um...不如一齊去飲野丫?
Cherie:好....
Charlene:唔好喇...費事阻住你地兩個啦...我ng想做電燈膽a...
(Rain挑通眼眉,知道Charlene中意Steven...)
Rain:....咩電燈膽呀..?我地冇野ga∼
Charlene:仲之ng去喇,拜!
(之後Charlene就走左去....)
Cherie:Charlene!
(Cherie跟住Charlene走埋...)
Steven:.....”咁我地仲去ng去飲野呀?
Rain:....”去law...
---Dream Cafe---
Steven:頭先Charlene做咩呢可?佢係咩唔舒服呀?
Rain:唔係∼
Steven:咁佢做咩呢?
Rain:冇野ge∼係wo,你都幾關心佢ga wo∼
Steven:咁佢係我朋友丫ma...唔好誤會a....我地冇野ga!
Rain:你對佢冇野姐,佢好似有d中意你wo∼
Steven:痴線!點會呀...
Rain:信不信由你喇∼
Steven:.......
---續---[/color]

[ Last edited by Rain∼* on 2004-12-19 at 06:52 AM ]

2004-12-19 12:58 PM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Sai[/b]  在 2004-12-19 11:18 AM 發表:[/u]

好彩cikc入黎睇下炸>V<”出左第11回都唔寫出黎...
好正牙!>V<”=oil,, [/quote]
oh,thank you∼*
 haha...一時ng記得左姐...hehe..
  等我依家寫番先...

2004-12-19 03:43 PM 塔[TEP:]
快d快d

好好睇唷

2004-12-20 03:33 AM RAINY
[quote] [u][b]雯mon[/b]  在 2004-12-19 03:43 PM 發表:[/u]

快d快d

好好睇唷 [/quote]
thank you∼
 我會快d ga啦∼∼*

2004-12-21 06:01 PM 塔[TEP:]
+oil~

等緊你

2004-12-21 08:02 PM `!!!ah嘉:)
好好睇牙..
特別係rain+steven果段感情..︿︿

頁: 1 2 3 4 [5] 6


Powered by Discuz! Archiver 5.5.0  © 2001-2006 Comsenz Inc.