2004-12-24 08:03 AM
RAINY
�歈寣飾菺憸鵂鞥諢@Love Chapter 12:
Kenny
Rain
Yan
Kama
Sai
---Rain回家路上...---
(Rain路經公園仔,見到Kenny好傷心gum坐左o係千秋度...)
Rain:Kenny?
(Kenny用手抹乾眼淚...)
Rain:你做乜野a..?
Kenny:....冇野...
Rain:有咩講出黎wo...睇下我幫ng幫到你?
Kenny:..你幫唔到我ga...
Rain:.....你ng講又知我幫ng到你?
Kenny:..我..我同欣欣分左手呀...
Rain:(驚訝)下?!點解會咁嫁?
Kenny:佢..中意左第ニ個男仔....
Rain:有冇搞錯呀!
Kenny:唔可以怪佢ge...咁佢有權中意第二個嫁ma..
Rain:其實呢..你洗乜咁慯心姐...你XGF又唔係話咁靚..佢咁普通...周街都有一大堆差ng多ga啦...係咪先∼?
以你咁靚仔,你驚冇女朋友咩!
Kenny:(面露笑容)又ng洗踩到咁盡下話!
Rain:哈,笑番咪好law∼*
Kenny:多謝你∼
Rain:多謝我乜野呀?我都冇做過d乜∼你a!快d番去訓覺la!唔係聽日成大對黑眼圈出曬黎,就真係冇女仔要你喇∼!
Kenny:ok,88∼
Rain:886∼
---F.4A--
Yan:喂!大新聞呀!
Kama:有咩大新聞呀...
Yan:Kenny同欣欣分左手wo!
Rain:車!一早知道la!
Yan:Rainrain呀,你ge最大勁敵走左la wo,你大把機會law∼
Rain:你講咩呀?
Sai:乜你中意Kenny嫁?
Kama:......”
Rain:又關你事?
Sai:八下姐...
Rain:係,我以前係中意Kenny,不過......
Sai:依家中意Steven,哈哈!
(Rain追住Sai黎打...)
Kama:唉....
Yan:點解Sai好似八左咁ge...
Kama:係law...前個月仲好似好cool咁....
Yan:依家變到咁鬼八...
Sai:你地講緊我呀...?
Rain:好明顯係la!
Sai:話我咩a?
Rain:八law!
Sai:係law...你地教壞我ge!
Kama:又關我地事!
Sai:講笑咋!其實呢,識左你地之後呢,成個人都開心左,冇以前gum cool喇∼
Rain:wa..乜你講d野咁∼老土ga!
Yan:係wo,Kama你準備好曬聽日d野未?
Kama:搞掂曬la∼聽日一早上Steven間餐廳度怖置la∼
Sai&Rain&Yan:好呀∼
---續---
2004-12-24 09:13 AM
笨Cherie*
好好睇也...>v<加油!!
2004-12-24 11:59 AM
RAINY
[quote] [u][b]喊包*晴[/b] 在 2004-12-24 09:13 AM 發表:[/u]
好好睇也...>v<加油!! [/quote]
thank you∼
ok,我會努力ga喇∼!
2004-12-24 02:18 PM
Yanyan∼
好好睇呀∼∼∼
2004-12-24 02:26 PM
RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Yanyan∼[/b] 在 2004-12-24 02:18 PM 發表:[/u]
好好睇呀∼∼∼ [/quote]
thank you! >v<
2004-12-24 02:28 PM
SIU湘
你真係作得巧巧呢..
期待下一集既出現也..
kakaka*
2004-12-25 05:16 AM
RAINY
[quote] [u][b]湘兒[/b] 在 2004-12-24 02:28 PM 發表:[/u]
你真係作得巧巧呢..
期待下一集既出現也..
kakaka* [/quote]
thank you a! >v<
2004-12-25 01:51 PM
RAINY
�歈寣飾菺憸鵂鞥諢@Love Chapter 13:
Kenny
Rain
Yan
Kama
Sai
---Steven間餐廳---
Steven’s mom:你地黎喇∼
Rain:Auntie! >v< 好耐冇見喇!
Steven’s mom:Rainrain大個女咁多喇∼
Kama:Auntie,你好,我叫Kama呀,打搞曬你地tim...
Steven’s mom:唔洗客氣wo∼
(Rain望望四周..)
Rain:Auntie,Steven呢??
Steven’s mom:唔知呢...頭先仲o係度ga....
Steven’s mom:你地o係度怖置la∼我行開陣先喇∼
Sai:Rain,仲望乜呀!Auntie話Steven唔o係度a!
Rain:邊個話你聽我揾佢姐!怖置la!
(20min....)
(當Kama諗住爬高貼個聖誕老人ge時候....)
Sai:喂!喂!喂!你仲乜爬咁高a!小心呀!跌親就麻煩喇!!
Kama:你洗乜咁緊張姐!!
Rain:哈...
(Kama再爬高一格ge時候,失重心跌下...好彩Sai o係下面接住kama...)
Kama:(面紅)唔該...>//<
Sai:(面紅)....都話左你小心d ga la...>//<
(Kama開始心散..)
(Kama將聖誕老人倒轉左黎貼....)
Rain:Kama,你倒轉左黎貼a......
Kama:下....係咩....?.....係wo....=_=”
Rain:(低聲說)你中意左Sai呀...?
Kama:.....邊...係...呢....
Rain:.....”你呃到其他人,你呃唔到我ge∼*哈!哈!哈!
Kama:........” -v-”
Rain:你係咪中意左Sai呀...?
Kama:......係.............又點...唔係又點呀.....
Rain:你地兩個都幾襯丫,喂!Sai wo...有錢仔黎ga wo....諗諗佢丫∼
Kama:(扯開話題..)咁...你同Steven點呀?
Rain:......”咩..咩...點呀...
Kama:中意人同人講wo∼
Rain:.......我..我..我...係女仔黎ga...仲乜要我同佢講wo...
Kama:家下男女平等ga喇!
Rain:(又扯開話題..)....呀!點解Yan咁耐都未黎ga呢....?打個電話俾佢先∼(之後Rain行開左...)
Kama:.....喂!Rain!
---至於Yan o個邊...---
(正當Yan諗緊野&想過馬路ge時候.....突然有架車駛過佢度.................................................好彩.......Kenny及時一手拉番Yan埋黎.......)
Kenny:嘩!乜你想死咩?
Yan:哈....=v= 諗緊野ma.....”
Kenny:好彩我及時拉住你姐!如果唔係!你咪車死左!
Yan:哈哈∼
Kenny:仲笑?!
Yan:你個樣好笑ma∼!咁緊張做乜姐∼!
Kenny:.......我有咩.......”
Yan:梗有la!緊張兩個字o係你個頭上面la!哈哈哈!
Kenny:(摸摸額頭...)有咩....?
Yan:講笑咋!咁認真做乜wo∼
Kenny:=v=”
---續---
2004-12-25 01:52 PM
初`=)
no me toooooo
2004-12-25 02:07 PM
Yanyan∼
巧睇呀......
+ oil
2004-12-25 02:45 PM
RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Yanyan∼[/b] 在 2004-12-25 02:07 PM 發表:[/u]
巧睇呀......
+ oil [/quote]
thank you,
我會努力ga la∼ >v<
2004-12-26 04:29 AM
RAINY
�歈寣飾菺憸鵂鞥諢@Love Chapter 14:
Kenny
Rain
Yan
Kama
Sai
Steven
Charlene
---續chapter 13...---
Yan:係呢,你依家去邊呀..?
Kenny:去幫你地手怖置law..”
Yan:哦∼
Kenny:你食左早餐未..??
Yan:未呀..
Kenny:我都未wo...不如一齊去食丫∼
Yan:..好呀!
---Steven間餐廳---
Rain:Kama呀!
Kama:係∼!咩事a?
Rain:點解Yanyan咁耐都未黎ga...?..會ng會有事ga?
Sai:佢可能ng記得姐...
Kama:嗯,又或者去左行街掛...
Rain:咁早有街行咩...?
Sai:唔洗咁擔心wo,冇事ge...
Yan:Hi,everybody∼*
Rain:你去左邊呀?嚇得我丫,仲以為你有事tim!
Kenny:Sorry...係我拉左佢陪我去食早餐姐∼
Rain:咁你仲乜唔開電話a?
Yan:下..我冇開咩...???(拎陪手提出黎)哈...哈...唔記得開tim...”
Kenny:係law,有咩可以幫到手a?
Kama:哈...大把啦!(跟住Kama發號施令..)
---令一邊Steven到處閒逛,諗緊買聖誕禮物時...---
Charlene:Steven∼!
Steven:下...?
Charlene:你仲乜自己一個行街呀..?你ng係去幫阿Rain佢地手ga咩..??
Steven:未買聖誕禮物丫ma...”好慯腦筋呀....都諗ng到買乜好....
Charlene:你係諗唔到買乜俾阿Rain咋ma∼
Steven:哈....” -v-”
Charlene:等我幫下你la∼*
---續---
[ Last edited by Rain∼* on 2004-12-26 at 04:32 AM ]
2004-12-26 04:32 AM
Yanyan∼
好短呀...
2004-12-26 04:38 AM
RAINY
[quote] [u][b]Yanyan∼[/b] 在 2004-12-26 04:32 AM 發表:[/u]
好短呀... [/quote]
趕住收檔ma....”
2004-12-30 07:20 AM
RAINY
�歈寣飾菺憸鵂鞥諢@Love Chapter 15:
Steven
Sai
Kenny
Rain
Kama
Yan
Charlene
吉
---Steven&Charlene經過一間珠寶店---
Charlene:喂!買手鏈la!女仔最中意ga喇∼
Steven:你最中意咋ma...-v-” 我都唔見Rain平時戴d飾物之類ge野gum ge....”
Charlene:下....咁呀...買衫丫!
Steven:衫....?好咩....”
Charlene:......咁....音樂盒丫!
Steven:咦!咁行!
Charlene:(有d唔耐煩...)....咩都唔好!!你送自己俾佢啦!!!><
Steven:(突然靈機一觸...)呀!我諗到喇!!
Charlene:你真係諗住送自己俾佢....”?
Steven:ng同你講喇!!走先!!
Charlene:喂!
(Steven一支箭標左去...)
---Steven係咁跑係咁跑......原來跑番學校...---
Steven:(喘氣..)吉...吉...吉..sir.....
吉:Steven??
Steven:我...我...我...想...
吉:你抖順條氣先啦!
Steven:吉sir!幫幫我!!我想學魔術!!仲要一日之內學識tim!
吉:下...
---Kama&Rain&Yan&Sai&Kenny o個邊...---
Sai:呼∼搞掂曬喇!!
(Rain望一路望住門囗...)
Yan:喂!
Rain:下...?
Yan:你仲咩係咁望住個門口呀...?
Rain:我有咩...?
Kama:(點頭)有呀!
Sai:人地望緊Steven幾時番ma∼
Rain:(死口唔認)邊..邊..係..姐!
Kenny:Rain呀,等我打個電話俾Steven,睇下佢係bin啦,好冇?
Rain:唔洗喇!
(Kenny冇聽Rain講,打左電話俾Steven,可惜冇人聽...)
Kenny:.....冇人聽tim....
Rain:冇人聽?點會ga!佢係咪有咩事????
Yan:又話唔係揾人∼
Rain:咩wo! >o<
(3hr後...)
Kama:Steven仲未黎....個party就開始喇....
Rain:Kenny!就打電話俾佢啦!!!
Kenny:哦!
(5min after..)
Kenny:冇人聽ar...”
Rain:下....
(臺上ge Kama)
Kama:歡迎大家黎到呢個party,一齊歡渡聖誕!!
Kama:大家中意ge話可以上台唱首歌送俾大家ga∼*
各人:咦?可以上臺唱歌wo!
Yan:喂,Rain!你咁中意唱歌不如上臺唱番首la∼
Rain:下..?我..?
Sai:(推Rain上台)唱la!!
Kama:咦?睇黎呢位同學仔想獻唱一曲wo∼
Rain:(企係台度傻下傻下..)下...Kama...我...
Kama:唱la∼
Rain:......哦∼
Kama:呢位同學仔你想唱咩歌..?
Rain:下....
Kama:想唱咩歌ar??
Rain:下..<一對>啦....
Kama:ok∼*
Rain:(唱)戲院中 一對纏綿情侶 螢幕裡 一分鐘做一對......
(Rain望望台下,並不見Steven,心裡不太開心...)
Yan:佢搞乜a...首歌咁sweet,佢唱到好似死左人gum ge....”
(突然....)
Steven:Kenny!
Kenny:你黎喇∼
(台上ge Rain,見到Steven,即刻成個人開心番....)
Rain:(唱)...如天生我最愛你 不呼天沒搶地 就這樣無道理 不需心理預備....(一路望住Steven)
(2min after..Rain唱完落番台..)
Rain:Steven!
Steven:hihi∼
Rain:你頭先去左bin呀??嚇死我喇!以為你有事tim...
Steven:Bin度有事姐∼
Steven:呀,係呀!帶你去睇d野丫∼!(Steven拖左Rain離開會場...)
Rain:?
---續---
[ Last edited by Rain∼* on 2004-12-30 at 07:23 AM ]
2005-3-19 07:22 AM
RAINY
�歈寣飾菺憸鵂鞥諢@Love Chapter 16:
Steven
Rain
吉
───學校禮堂───
Rain:你帶我番黎學校仲乜呀??
Steven:ng好問咁多,坐低先!
(之後Steven走左上臺上面...吉走埋出黎...)
Rain:搞乜野呀??
吉:Lady and Gentleman,大魔術師Steven黎喇!
Rain:下?!
(之後Steven表演左連串ge魔術....最後一個魔術..Steven走埋去Rain身bin...Steven o係Rain後面變左隻介指出黎...隻介指上面刻住Steven love Rain...)
Rain:Steven...(攬住Steven)
Steven:^^
───THE END───
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