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發表於 2007-5-13 05:55 PM  資料  短消息  加為好友 
Good afternoon.

1.
Today, i want to introduce my favourite people.
My favourite people is YUKI.
She is my best friend.

5.
To me,she is very special and important.
Because she is my first friendin the primary school.
When i stay with her,i can forget all the vexation .

2.
Yuki is beautiful.
Many people like her .
She has the big eyes, long hair and her skin is as white as the snow,Sometimes i call her snowwhite.

3.
I like Yuki because she is kind and helpful.
She always support me and tell me 'never give up'.
If i do anything wrong,she will tell me the reason why i am wrong and help me to do it correctly again .
She is not a selfish people.
If you ask her for help,she never say 'no'.

6.
2 years ago, My pet Don Don died.
She told me don't be sad.
She said, Don Don was not really die, it just went to another world.

4.
She is honest too.
She never tell lie to anyone.

7.
Although we study in the different secondary school,our friendship will never be lost.


THANK YOU!


我覺得篇文章d次序怪怪的
那些數字是我認為的次序
應該先說外貌
才說性格
然後再說你們之間的事


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